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18考研【写作押题】第11篇: 渴求与自满
作者:admin 发布日期:2017/12/5 关注次数: 二维码分享

Directions:

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should

1. describe the drawing briefly,

2. interpret its intended meaning, and then

3. give your comments.

You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET.

18考研【写作押题】第11篇: 渴求与自满

审题及提纲

图画由一个标有“自满”标签和一个标有“渴求”标签的两个人以及一壶象征“知识”的茶水构成,内容简单,寓意深远。面对象征“知识”的茶水,两个人的态度截然不同。根据图中人物的手势与语言可知,左边标有“自满”标签的人虽知识贫乏,但对“知识之茶”却持拒绝态度;而右边标有“渴求”标签的人虽知识渊博,但对知识的渴求欲望不减。由此可见,文章寓意明显,旨在强调不断追求知识的重要性。考生在写作时可结合身边的具体事例或名人事迹进行充分论证。

第一段:描述图画。描述图画时,要善于抓关键信息。可从二人的行文与言语方面入手,通过对比描述,形成鲜明对比,从而为下文揭示图画寓意作铺垫。

第二段:揭示寓意,充分延伸。首先通过上段对图画的描述,提炼出文章的主旨。接着结合名人事迹进行论证,增强文章的说服力。

第三段:总结评论,深化主题。再次点题并鼓励人们要“活到老,学到老”。

经典模板范文

As is vividly depicted in the picture, there stand two men, one of whom labeled with “selfsatisfaction” flatly turns down the water symbolizing knowledge, by contrast, the other is eager for more knowledge although he is more learned.

Simple as it seems at the first glance, what the drawing tries to convey is farreaching and profound. “Stay Hungry. Stay Foolish”,said by Steve Jobs in the commencement speech at Stanford University. Admittedly, this spirit is extremely crucial to both personal development and social progress. If you examine the life journeys of successful people, you will most likely find a noteworthy quirk: the more successful they are, the more they crave knowledge. Bertrand Russell, precisely with the enthusiasm for search of knowledge, completed more than 40 books in his whole life. Hua Luogeng, although he had dropped out at an early age, still persevered in learning and eventually was praised as the founder and pioneer of numerous mathematical research fields. The passion for knowledge, simple but overwhelmingly strong, has governed their life,thus resulting in their significant contributions in their respective field.

All in all, keeping eagerness for knowledge is of great significance. Accordingly, we should spare no effort to arm ourselves with as much knowledge as possible. Always remember “live and learn”.

正如图画所生动描绘的那样,图中有两个人,其中一个标有“自满”标签的人斩钉截铁地拒绝象征“知识”的茶水,与此相反,另一个人虽知识渊博,但仍旧渴望更多“知识之水”的灌溉。

乍看一眼,尽管这幅图画看似简单,实则其所要传达的内容具有重大而深远的意义。正如斯坦福·乔布斯在牛津大学毕业典礼上致辞的那样,“求知若饥,虚心若愚”。诚然,这种精神对于个人发展与社会进步是至关重要的。如果你去研究成功人士的人生之旅,你大概会发现一个值得注意的怪癖:他们越成功,就越渴望知识。正是由于追寻知识的热情,伯特兰·罗素在其人生中撰写了40多本书。尽管华罗庚早年辍学,但仍在坚持学习,最后被誉为众多数学研究领域的奠基人和先驱。对知识简单却又强烈无比的热情支配着

他们的生活,从而使他们在各自的领域里做出了重大的贡献。

总之,保持对知识的热忱很重要。因此,我们应该不遗余力地用尽可能多的知识武装自身。要将“活到老,学到老” 永远铭记于心。

靓词靓语

turn down 拒绝

flatly ad.诚然;断然地

drop out 辍学

persevere in 坚持;保持

quirk n.怪癖;借口

spare no effort 不遗余力;节省

farreaching a.深远的;广泛的

commencement n.毕业典礼

noteworthy a.值得注意的;显著的

overwhelmingly ad.势不可挡地

靓句分析

① As is vividly depicted in the picture, there stand two men, one of whom labeled with “selfsatisfaction” flatly turns down the water symbolizing knowledge, by contrast, the other is eager for more knowledge although he is more learned.

本句用在开篇,用于描述图画内容。其中,As引导非限定性定语从句。there stand two men采用了倒装句结构;whom引导的非限定性定语从句修饰先行词two men,过去分词短语labeled with “selfsatisfaction”作后置定语,修饰one of whom;现在分词短语symbolizing knowledge作the water的后置定语。by contrast为插入语,用来引出对比的对象或内容。连词although引导让步状语从句。整个句子逻辑层次清晰,语意连贯,多样化的句式表达博人眼球;加之副词flatly的使用,更将画中人物刻画地惟妙惟肖。

② Simple as it seems at the first glance, what the drawing tries to convey is farreaching and profound.

本句用作揭示图画主旨、寓意。句中,as引导的让步状语从句,并采用了“形容词(simple)+as+主语(it)+系动词(seems)”的部分倒装结构。what引导主语从句。整个句子环环相扣,结构紧凑。

③ If you examine the life journeys of successful people, you will most likely find a noteworthy quirk: the more successful they are, the more they crave knowledge.

本句用作支持句,用来总结成功人士的共同特点。其中,if引导的真实条件状语从句。冒号后的内容解释说明名词短语a noteworthy quirk;同时,该句使用了“the more…the more…”的句式结构,表示后者随前者的变化而变化。

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